Saynday catching the sun

 We have been learning about narative writing  we rewrote a story Catching the sun . Here is my story

 The people on the dark mystic side of the world, which had no sun . The animals told Saynday his plan. Cunning Fox sprinted to the burning side of the world. He stopped at the sand
hill and he watched the Sun people. Fox learned how to play the game that the sun people had played. Fox snatched the sun and bolted away to the Deer. The big Deer sprinted away from Sun people. The Sun people were falling behind. The Deer passed the sun to slow Magpie. Magpie sprinted to Saynday. Saynday walked to the dark mist side in the dark. Saynday through the sun up high into the air so it could be dark and light on both sides of the world.